Day 6 of 500 Words – Using Real Life Experiences to Fuel Your Writing

A splendid thunderstorm began as I finished my words last night. I listened to the rain and watched the lightning through the blinds. It was calming and invigorating, an experience to file away in my mind in case I have need of them in my current novel.

There have been times at parties when I have sat back and watched. Sometimes I try to capture the feel of a party through listening and close my eyes. I do this, not to use it against anyone or make a caricature out of them but to hear the rhythms of conversation, the clinking of silverware and the taste of certain foods.

I have done this at other places as well such as malls, baseball games, the forest, anywhere that might help my senses take in an entire experience.

View of Keuka Lake in the Summer

One night, years afterward while at home in Grand Rapids, I had a dream about being there and it was shocking. I cannot share what happened now because it is a plot point of my novel, but it was something that was so vivid it was if I was transported back.

I don’t think I would be writing this novel had I not been paying attention to the atmosphere of Keuka Lake. It is incredibly valuable as a writer or artist to get the “feel” of an experience through all of our senses. If you have a scene in your novel that happens at a play, go to one. If you have a scene in a mall, go to one. Sit down, soak in the sounds and sights and tastes. 

Some writing is about making stuff up. Some writing is about relaying an experience people have. What better way to learn about an experience than to actually have it yourself?

Cheers,

Bob

Day 5 of 500 Words – When You Begin to Like Your Story

I don’t have a lot of time to report but I did want to write an update today.

Last night, I broke the barrier all writers desire to break when writing their novel. I began to like my story.

I know that sounds silly but writing is work. Some people have a job they love and some people have a job they hate. Writing can be both and one or the other at different intervals of the writing process especially at the beginning or end of a particular work.

Any sliver of time with any contraption I have, including this beast.

I believe I am beyond the point of searching for my writing stride and have found that precious writer’s groove we all hope to discover when penning our novels. The one that makes us hungry and eager, looking for any sliver of time to jot down a few words.

I hope with this new found joy in my story, I can plow through my first draft in the next few months. Perhaps this is a bit ambitious with buying a house and moving my family in the next month or so, but I think its better to have an aggressive date of completion, than none at all.

Until tomorrow, keep writing.

Cheers,

Bob

Day 4 of 500 Words – Writing Exercise

As many of you know, I love hockey. Congratulations to the Detroit Red Wings for winning last night. Three more to go to take the quarterfinal series. Keep it up boys!

Yesterday, after the game I sat down at the computer. It had been a very long week. Travel for work, Clara was teething, and the last three days of the week I sputtered along on four to five hours of broken sleep a night.

Needless to say it was hard to sit down at the computer and get my 500 words. My body had no intention of following through and after arguing with myself and a little encouragement from my wife, I was able to complete the 500 words a little after midnight.

I played hockey for most of my life and there were some games that I scored goals and played fairly well. There

Me pretending to be an ice hockey player

were also other games where nothing went right. Most of the time it went well because I practiced and thought about strategies against the other team. It went poorly for the exact opposite reasons. I was working and could not practice, I did not take the time to think about match ups and the opposing goaltender.

This time, writing was just an exercise. I did not have a breakthrough. I do not have piles of pages to report. I did however continue the practice of writing, which will help if I have a plan the next time I sit down at the page.

Until tomorrow, keep writing.

Cheers,

Bob

Day 3 of 500 Words – Following the Giants

Good day. It is day three of 500 words a day for a week and I am pleased to say that I am still writing and it is coming easier. I was not sure how long it might take to get into the story I am writing but as I have little research to do I can write fairly quickly now that my fingers are accustom to fiction again. I am not saying it is good, but it is there and that simple fact is refreshing.

I realized as I was finishing my 500 words last night that I have not read a lot of children’s stories lately. I’ve read the Chronicles of Narnia a while back (they are mountains better than the horrible Disney adaptations please read them!) but I wanted to delve deeper into the classic literature my target audience reads.

I decided to start with The Princess and the Goblin by George MacDonald. Here’s what C.S. Lewis and G.K. Chesterton have to say (through Wikipedia) about this esteemed man:

It was C.S. Lewis who wrote that he regarded MacDonald as his “master”: “Picking up a copy of Phantastes one day at a train-station bookstall, I began to read. A few hours later,” said Lewis, “I knew that I had crossed a great frontier.” G. K. Chesterton cited The Princess and the Goblin as a book that had “made a difference to my whole existence.”

If it can mean that much to the giants of Lewis and Chesterton, then, perhaps, it may serve me well to glean what I can. 

If you’ve taken up the writing challenge, good luck to you.

Cheers,

Bob

Day 2 of 500 Words – The Warm Up

It’s day two of the 500 words a day for 7 days gauntlet. Also, just to be clear, this blog does not count. Only work on my novel does. I was successful last night even with the distraction of the Nashville Predators and Detroit Red Wings playoff game. It is the quarterfinals and they put up a miserable game. Down 0-1 — what a shame. Come on Wings!

Anyway, in between the intermissions I was able to get some words down on my new story. I’m into chapter two which describes a drive out of New York city toward one of the Finger Lakes in upstate New York. It is an all day and night excursion coupled with an awkward conversation between a father and son. I will not say much about this story yet but that it is about family.

Many stories that surround families are tragedies, ones that see loved ones wrenched apart by horrors and unfortunate circumstances of life. This story is about how that sort of family comes back together and is stronger all the more because of it.

Here’s to another 500 words tomorrow.

Cheers,

Bob

Day 1 of 500 Words – How About We Just Write?

I have been a complainer lately to my writer friends. I have been childish, lost, and above all, lazy. When you are lazy and a writer, those are the two worst things you can be. The novels will not just sprout up out of the ground like spring tulips, right?

If there is a magic formula to this writing conundrum, please someone tell me. Otherwise, I will be resigned to believe you just have to do it, which is not what I want to hear.

Therefore I write this blog post to declare that I will write 500 words a day for the next week. I will check in here. I will tell you if I am successful. Whether the writing is good or bad is not the point. The point is I am out of writing shape and I need a pep talk. I need to start working out those horribly flabby writing muscles.

I have a billion excuses just like you. I have a child that does not sleep. I have a demanding job. On top of these, I want to be a great husband, father, friend, and employee. We are also buying a house (WOOHOO!)

There are times one needs to find refuge under the mother duck’s wing. There are also times that one needs to strike out into the storm of life and march forward no matter what the cost.

My first instinct is that I don’t want to be accountable. I don’t want to be more exhausted than I already am. I want to eat pizza and beach myself on the couch to watch another Detroit Red Wings game. But I just can’t anymore.

So here’s to a weekly challenge of 500 words on my new novel. Here’s to a fresh start and bucking up. Here’s to a swift kick to my rear end and the public acknowledgement of commitment to writing.

If you want to write and just can’t, join me for 3500 words in 7 days, beginning today.

Cheers,

Bob

The Hunger Games – The Power of Good Fiction

This weekend my wife and I went on a date. It was a breath of fresh air from the normal grind of having young children. We love them and were very eager to get back to them but, as some of you who have children know, it can be wonderful to eat in peace and actually have a warm meal to boot.

We visited Olive Garden and then went to see the new film The Hunger Games based on Suzanne Collins’ best selling novel. I was not sure what to expect but I was intrigued that droves flocked to see it making it one of, if not the biggest, opening of all time.

Now, there have been piles and piles written, filmed, tweeted, and Facebooked about how great this film is. Many of you reading have most certainly watched it already so you may ask yourself, why flood the market with more thoughts on it? Good question, please keep reading.

This post is in response to a review and a conversation. These both likened The Hunger Games story to, and I quote, “a lot like the Twilight movies”.

If you have seen the film or read the novels I hope you stand up and shout WHAT! like I did. Because they are different, unequivocally separate.

Granted they both have the teenage love triangle, however, that is where the similarities come it a firm halt.

The Hunger Games is about oppression. It’s about a society living sprawled on its back while another, more powerful, has placed a boot on its chest so securely that there is no way of removing it. The subservient society lives only because their masters allow it. The conquerors allow enough room to breath, but little else. If the powerless race tries to move they stomp, reminding the lessors of their place in the world.

Then, to make matters worse, the powerless have to watch as their children are called to a lottery. One that, if won, guarantees them certain death. And, there is nothing their parents can do about it. Nothing.

Cheery right? Why would you watch a film so grim and grotesque which toys with the lives of young children like the ancient tales of the Minotaur? Because, sometimes it is good to feel uncomfortable. Not because of crassness or the simple fact of pushing the boundaries of what is decent but, because it make you think things that normally stay far from the thoughts of our cushy lives.

It makes you think of the murders in Mexico.

It makes you think of the atrocities still happening in the Middle East and North Korea.

It makes you think of drug cartels and their tole on families and the most hushed and uncomfortable topic of people trafficking.

Things that happen right now, this minute, and the powerless that suffer because of it.

Sometimes I tell people that I don’t like to read stories that are sad. I say this because I know people who are suffering, just like you do. But, living in denial and being encouraged by a happy ending are two very separate things. 

Some of you are looking for some grand ending, but I have none. I have no way of instantly stopping these atrocities that are happening or advice on how to contribute to their demise.

So why write a post like this, right? Why even bother? Because that is what fiction can do. It uses story to inspire us to be better, to want to be and to think differently. Whether Fiction or Non-Fiction, hearing stories of people who fight when odds are hopeless, when things are too horrible to continue, those are the stories that stir us into action. William Wallace, Earnest Shackleton, Harry Potter, or little Frodo Baggins, it matters not. We watch, read, or listen to a great story and we want to act, to fight for the oppressed, for the injustices we see regardless if they are true happenings or fictitious tales of an old dusty book.

This is power of a good story.

The power of great books and movies.

The power of fiction.

What are your thoughts?

Cheers.

Bob