Less than two weeks ago I read a blogpost that mentioned a small press was doing a free critique weekend. I even posted it on my own blog here. A big thank you to Jennifer M Eaton for mentioning it. They would take the first five pages of your work and give you honest feedback, no strings attached. This is not a submission but part of their free critique weekend. I figured I am on a high of finishing my draft and as it is submitted, I could do with a good beating.
Here’s what they had to say:
Thank you for taking part in our Tender Love Critique Weekend!
Your story starts off with a bang and I must say that I was immediately sucked in, even from just the first five pages! After reading your short sample, I’m curious about the world you have built and eager to learn more about it.
Please find attached your submission, which I have made notes on — one of which is that I caution you to be aware of overused words. You’ll see that I have highlighted frequently used words, which can potentially pull readers out of the story.
I hope you find my critiques helpful and that when you have finished your novel you consider Lycaon Press/Breathless Press as a potential publisher, as it is our hope to encourage writers everywhere in their pursuit of writing.
Writing is a lonely pursuit at times. It was encouraging to have someone who is not my friend or family member validate my hard work. It was a small victory and sometimes that is all we need to keep going to the next page, to the next word.
Keep writing today friends. That is the only tried and true method of success.
7 thoughts on “Small Victories”
That’s some great feedback. Sometimes we really need another set of eyes to spot those pesky repeats. Good luck with the editing!
Jennifer, thanks for the heads up! The feedback was much faster than I anticipated. How’d things go for you?
I didn’t get mine back yet. 😦 I don’t know if that’s good or bad karma.
I’m sure it’ll turn up, maybe even today!
Such a joy when feedback like that comes in. You obviously have something special so keep hacking away at those overused words and I’m sure it will all be worth it in the end. Congrats!
Thanks Gemma. Indeed, and fast feedback at that!